Topic
How has globalization change Indonesia?
Support Sentence 1
Globalization change how people dressed in Indonesia, follow the trend fashion in the world because of globalization.
Support Sentence 2
Globalization impact to technology in Indonesia, more advance technology that used in every area.
Support Sentence 3
Food also affected by globalization in Indonesia, there is lot of fast food everywhere now.
Concluding Sentence
Globalization has change Indonesia a lot in every aspect and in every kind of field in Indonesia. Globalization have positive and negative effect to Indonesia but most of it is positive because of globalization Indonesia grow so fast.
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